Mellow Yellow Monday: Daisies
These yellow daisies,
raked by wind and rain, cannot
take away my pain.*
© 2010 by Magical Mystical Teacher
Photo: IOOF Cemetery, Prescott, Arizona
For more Mellow Yellow Monday photos, click here.
raked by wind and rain, cannot
take away my pain.*
© 2010 by Magical Mystical Teacher
Photo: IOOF Cemetery, Prescott, Arizona
For more Mellow Yellow Monday photos, click here.
*The pronoun “my” is merely a literary device. It does not refer to the poet’s pain!
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Posted on June 27, 2010, in Arizona, cemetery, Mellow Yellow Monday, my digital photos, my senryu. Bookmark the permalink. 17 Comments.
This creates mystery within me…wondering if you are in pain…if so, I am so sorry.
poignant and sad. I do hope you’ll have a good week.
So sad.
Very sad poem, but the daises are very pretty and cheery. Happy MYM!
For some reason the photo is not appearing – I have refreshed several times! But like the others, I feel there is a sadness in your poem that is very real! Walk in peace!
Now the photo has appeared right after I posted my comment! The daisies are very bright and lovely…but still I wonder!
Gemma,
I added this disclaimer as a footnote:
*The pronoun “my” is merely a literary device. It does not refer to the poet’s pain!
All is well!
MMT
Obviously loved dearly by someone….
Anyone who has lost someone dear can relate.
That is very beautiful and very sad at the same time – I’m sorry for your sadness.
I learn from you again about the “my” in the poets perspective. Good to know it’s all a poem and not in real life. Happy Monday!
MYM~Yellow Dahlia
Feeling sorry for the ones who lost a loved one…
The cheerful yellow daisies must bring only the happy memories back.
The true meaning of the roadside memorial is such a sad one.
Sorry to hear that you’re in pain. Love the shot and the haiku.
Happy MYM!
Liz @ MLC
sad but nice capture though!
u may view mine here
Sounds like Elvis or maybe Hank Williams. I think I know that tune.
any flower at any graveyard tell of a story that the person who placed it there is hurting.
sorry ………