A Trio of Senryu

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the sound of her words—
a pleasing little crinkle
on the face of day
 
~~ ~~ ~~
 
The hands of Jesus
do not demand anything—
mercy falls like rain.
 
~~ ~~ ~~
 
She makes no progress
as she tries to navigate
her soul’s deep waters.

 
© 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
More Three Word Wednesday: “Crinkle, Demand, Navigate”
 
More The Poetry Pantry #89

Posted on February 29, 2012, in haiku, senryu, The Poetry Pantry, Three Word Wednesday. Bookmark the permalink. 8 Comments.

  1. Love the first one.. made me smile. :)

  2. ‘A pleasing little crinkle on the face of day’…..I love that word picture.

  3. These are all exceptionally good! I particularly like the second one.

  4. well done all three of them

  5. The first is definitely my favorite!

  6. Soul searching is often hard.

  7. Lovely trio. Mercy falls like rain -yes.

  8. daryledelstein

    Wise words these

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