Drawbridge

Haiku Heights
 
 

There be cheers and shouts
resounding from the drawbridge—
good Queen Bess draws near.

 
© 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
 
More September Heights: “Drawbridge”

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Posted on September 1, 2012, in Haiku Heights, senryu, September Heights. Bookmark the permalink. 17 Comments.

  1. welcoming Queen…good one!

  2. Oh very nice! Like the simple power of your words

  3. I, also, hear the cheers and feel the excitement.

  4. I can hear the cheer.. :) Loved it..

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  5. I am loving how we all approach this in our own ways, much fun to be had

  6. Great first line! And a surprising haiku. I like it!

  7. Yes, I picture her on a horse with outriders and flags and the people waving and throwing their hats in the air :)

  8. Suddenly, I see awhole scene unfolding before me. WOW!

  9. i liked it .. Amazing haiku ..

  10. Did this happen when the queen was parachuting in?!

  11. awesome haiku … welcoming the Queen …

  12. This is great. I love the wording.

  13. I don’t think I could use “drawbridge” in a senryu, so I salute you!

  14. “hear hear! – the Queen is near!” :D

  15. Ah Queen Bess… her memory echoes on the drawbridge.

  16. Wonderful use of the prompt. Lower the bridge and welcome the queen in!

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