Autumn

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This evening the wind
is pecking at my window
with its autumn beak.

 
© 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
 
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Posted on September 4, 2012, in autumn, haiku, Haiku Heights, Sensational Haiku Wednesday, September Heights. Bookmark the permalink. 37 Comments.

  1. ignore, maybe it will go away

    • magicalmysticalteacher

      Actually, I would welcome autumn and some cooler weather at this point. It was 101 here in the desert yesterday–and expected to go higher today!

  2. Well it must then be music to your ears…enjoy and wait..and see if my haiku says something….

  3. oh, I like this! Pecking wind…

  4. Nice, very nice. I love the last little surprise!

  5. very nice an autumn beak liking that

  6. Fantastic imagery. Wind pecking with an autumn beak, love it.

  7. That is such a gorgeous image!

  8. The wind pecking !!! Great picture !!!

  9. MMT this is a nice haiku … totally autumn in less words.

  10. I would dearly love having cooler weather pecking at my door.

  11. Outstanding image…I like the autumn beak ~

  12. is the beak crimson too! :-)

  13. I like “the wind is pecking at my window” Great image of autumn.

  14. I love the idea of wind with seasonal beaks!

  15. Ah the autumn wind. Sounds like a cool friend.

  16. Autumn beak….
    Amazing imagination….

  17. Autumn’s beak!
    Here runs my imagination.

  18. Superb interpretation. I envy your skill with metaphor.

  19. you’ve captured that nip in the air!

  20. me too liked the autumn beak…simply superb ..

  21. Powerful image haiku ~ can see it, hear it, feel it ~ well done ~ (A Creative Harbor) on Blogger ^_^

  22. Keep the window closed, lest the autumn leaves decide to visit your living room, MMT ;)

  23. Wonderful imagery. I love it.

  24. Ridiculously beautiful and creative.. you leave me awestruck teacher… what is your name? are you really your teacher?

    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/09/autumn-haiku.html

  25. love this.. very creative indeed. I can hear the leaves “pecking” at my window

  26. I like that phrase autumn beak. Very nice. I am totally a day off with the holiday. I forgot Sensational Haiku Wednesday.

  27. I do love an Autumn peck… ;) Nice! We had a very light week with our traditional haiku – a total contrast to the first time we did it, and broke participation records! hrm. Weird.

    • magicalmysticalteacher

      I think the light participation had more to do with many haiku poets participating in the September daily challenge at Haiku Heights than with a reticence to write traditional haiku. I guess we’ll find it out tomorrow, won’t we? :)

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