Pressure

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on a busy street
deranged woman whimpering—
crumpled little wren

 
© 2011 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
More Sensational Haiku Wednesday: “Pressure”

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Posted on October 23, 2012, in senryu, Sensational Haiku Wednesday. Bookmark the permalink. 10 Comments.

  1. That’s a heavy scene – a pressurised drama!

  2. Oh my, that really struck at my heart.

  3. well ~ powerful message in haiku ~ (A Creative Harbor) ^_^

  4. so sad that life’s pressures can crush a mind…

  5. made me so sad for that women!

  6. poor lady… sometimes it does get too much to handle…

  7. ah, sad! Poor thing. Sometimes you are given way more than you can handle, I guess. Well done.

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