Witches

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Witches on the heath
mutter bad news for Macbeth—
darksome forebodings.

 
© 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
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Posted on October 27, 2012, in Haiku Heights, senryu. Bookmark the permalink. 19 Comments.

  1. I love the mysterious nature to this one.

  2. I like the darksome forebodings ~

  3. I’m with Grace, again. Darksome forebodings is a wonderful wordsmithing.

  4. I can picture those ‘witches on the heath”

  5. Great! Love the word “mutter”. (The only problem with your haiku is that it brought back memories of college course, struggling to read Shakespeare without falling asleep . . . and now I’m twitching.)

  6. I like the use of mutter as well good write

  7. Ah, the Scottish play, as Shakespeareans call it. Nice one.

  8. I guess bad news is bad even if muttered!

  9. Good reference to Macbeth here … it’s my favorite Shakespearean play :-)

  10. I like Macbeth as well. Was wondering if someone would use this.

  11. Hubble, bubble toil and trouble :)

  12. Awesome haiku. Love the mystery in this scene of witches on the heath, for sure skyclad and dancing and chanting.

  13. kind of like a bad dream…nice write

  14. wonderful imagery and choice of words. so evocative..

  15. nice word play… lovely haiku :)

  16. Darksome! Such a lovely word!

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