In the night he comes—
tranquil dancer, fond of me,
altering my way.

© 2011 by Magical Mystical Teacher
Photo: Kahumana Organic Farm, Waianae, Oahu, Hawaii
More Carry on Tuesday with the theme “Beware thoughts that come in the night” here
More Three Word Wednesday with the theme “Alter, Fond, Tranquil” here
More Haiku My Heart at Recuerda Mi Corazon here
More Share the Joy Thursday ruminations here
More Shadow Shot Sunday photos here
More Skywatch Friday photos here
More Himmelsk photos here


Posted on June 10, 2011, in Carry on Tuesday, Haiku My Heart, Hawaii, Himmelsk, my digital photos, my senryu, Oahu, Shadow Shot Sunday, Sky Watch Friday, Three Word Wednesday, Waianae. Bookmark the permalink. 31 Comments.

  1. Wonderful. I love Shiva and his dance.

  2. This haiku brings all kinds of images to me… love the photo too!

  3. Oh this is beautiful love it!

  4. Nicely done in such a tight haiku.

  5. Happy Dancing !
    Beautiful haiku.

  6. irresistible

    transformation comes dancing

    bright awakenings

  7. Meget smukt og himmelsk..
    God pinse til dig og dine. 🙂

  8. Altering your way…hmmm. …” fond of me” is totally unexpected. Your haiku has this element of surprise which I like.

  9. Very thoughtful and sweet your post is!

  10. what a wonderful haiku for the dancing photo…

  11. You must be on a
    summer voyage, far away.
    I’m still in school….bleck!

  12. Ooooh love the mystery in this one!

  13. I like this haiku very much. There is an intimacy about it with the “in the night he comes” and “fond of me” and I love the “tranquil dancer /altering my way.” There is a transformation in this fondness. Yes I like it very much.

  14. I love this combination of image and haiku. Thanks for sharing.

    All the best, Boonie

  15. Dancing in the shadows! We know some people who really should…lol!!

  16. Simply peaceful, with words to comfort and guild!

  17. Is that Shiva dancing in the twilight, gently, paternally steering your course? Beautiful imnage and haiku, MMT~

  18. I love the delicate lacework in the photo, and the haiku is so true, as well!

  19. Nice shot! Here’s my shadow post for today. See you around!

  20. where is this place. Thats the Natraj

  21. What a perfect haiku! Shivea dancing in our dreams. Love it!

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