Discern

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Without a mirror,
I must peer at sky and stone
to discern my face.

 
 
Text and photo © 2011 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
Photo: Street near Mina el Edén, Zacatecas, México
 
More The Height of Haiku Challenge, Day 2 with the theme “Mirror” here
 
More Haiku My Heart at Recuerda Mi Corazon here
 
More Monday Poetry Train Revisited #135 here
 
More SkyWatch Friday photos here
 
More The Poetry Pantry #64 here
 
More Himmelsk photos here

Posted on September 2, 2011, in Haiku My Heart, Himmelsk, Mexico, Mina el Edén, Monday Poetry Train Revisited, my digital photos, my senryu, Sky Watch Friday, Zacatecas. Bookmark the permalink. 15 Comments.

  1. Ah, lovely.. beautiful.. MMT..

  2. Sharpens the senses……Keen.insight and good judgement!!

  3. The sky can reflect if we truly see, I think 🙂

  4. Lovely skies, perfect words and great composition as always! And as always, I do enjoy visiting your blog! Hope you have a great weekend!

    Sylvia

  5. Love the sense of elevation in the picture….and see the truth that sets you free.

  6. Nice photo and words.

    Regards!

  7. Wherever we look, there we are if only we would see.

  8. And perhaps your soul… Terrible feeling to be invisible, isn’t it? As though one isn’t really there… Good couplet–a triplet, I suspect?

  9. Great haiku. We are reflected in all of creation are we not. If the sky is our mirror that is our divinity, our limitlessness and stone is our foundation,. Just a thought.
    Noelle

  10. Oh yes and a very true reflection you might see floating with the clouds 🙂

  11. Another good take on the prompt. Don’t you love it when a poem prompt brings out too many ideas for a single haiku? 🙂

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