Ladies of the Night: Three Senryu


With a volcano
you might have some excitement—
with a whore, you will.
~~~ ~~~ ~~~
Only the church bells
for excitement this morning—
this evening, the whores.
~~~ ~~~ ~~~
Somebody told me
with whores there’s more excitement
at dusk than at dawn.

Text © 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
More Sensational Haiku Wednesday: “Excite/ment”

Posted on March 13, 2012, in senryu, Sensational Haiku Wednesday. Bookmark the permalink. 12 Comments.

  1. Ive never seen so many good looking whores in my life!

  2. Some thought there was more excitement with whores than with wives.

  3. Love the hypocrisy you’ve outed in these. Excellent.

  4. Hmmmm ~ very different haikus for you ~ LOL ~namaste, Carol ^_^

  5. Interesting take on excitement.

  6. Very interesting direction, MMT!

  7. The first one really cracked me up. Volcanoes can be unpredictable. 🙂

  8. ACK! haha, you crack me up! I feel like I need a shower now.

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