Six Takes on ‘Renovation’

Haiku Heights
 
 

Crumbs from Christ’s own hand—
enough for renovation
of the famished soul.
 
~~~ ~~~ ~~~
 
Water from God’s well—
a stream of renovation
for the thirsting soul.
 
~~~ ~~~ ~~~
 
She threw the book down—
she needed renovation
from another source.
 
~~~ ~~~ ~~~
 
As he oversaw
the renovation project,
his visage crumbled.
 
~~~ ~~~ ~~~
 
wailing jazz trombone
a soulful renovation
for the broken heart
 
~~~ ~~~ ~~~
 
A crumbling temple
in need of renovation—
Master Builder, come!

 
© 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
More We Write Poems: NaPoWriMo #20
 
More The April Heights: “Renovation”

Posted on April 19, 2012, in Haiku Heights, NaPoWriMo, The April Heights 2012, We Write Poems. Bookmark the permalink. 13 Comments.

  1. You beat me. Probably due to devine intervention… I’m really enjoying your haiku series.

  2. Beautiful all of them loved the second one most….:)

  3. You keep the last to be the best most of the time.. well I have a question.. why six takes always..any significance..because it doesnt appear to be random..if you can share MMT.. RS:)

  4. Very nice…I specially like soulful renovation and famished soul ~ Excellent take on the prompt ~

    http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/04/womans-face.html

  5. I enjoyed all six of your haiku today. My favourite was
    “wailing jazz trombone
    a soulful renovation
    for the broken heart” thank you

  6. Well created haiku ~ as always ~ enjoy ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

  7. Your ran the whole gamut of life, MMT! Renovations in all its goodness with divine help the most encouraging salvation besides one that soothes the lonely heart. Great write!

    Hank

  8. Nice series of haiku MMT. It’s lovely to read and I enjoyed reading them.

  9. My favorites…3 and 5. Well done MMT.

  10. My favorites: The first two! (Perhaps my soul or soulfulness needs a bit of renuvation this morning) Amazing, how many ways you can use ‘renovation.’

  11. wailing trombone ~ that would be my fav ~ very musical, very visual 🙂

  12. The first one is my favorite!!! Nicely done ~~
    Day 20 ~~ Renovations

  13. the thirsting soul needs another source… crumbled visage of broken hearts ….needs the master to come… its time .. i guess 🙂

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