Universal Sigh

Derelict house

broken, battered walls
no lock keeps intruders out—
universal sigh

Text and photo © 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
Photo: A derelict house, Morelia, Michoacán, México
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Posted on June 6, 2012, in Haiku Heights, Mexico, Michoacán, Morelia, REDnesday, Ruby Tuesday 2, senryu, Sensational Haiku Wednesday. Bookmark the permalink. 13 Comments.

  1. A sigh, indeed. Very sad.

  2. very well done and creative haiku and photo ~ thanks,namaste, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

  3. I am sighing too .. so sad to see things torn down

  4. War sucks but you described its effects beautifully…..sigh

  5. sadness of war’s effects should be felt universally, we are so sheltered.

  6. A sad truth… no lock to keep intruders out so true… ashamed of our own contribution to world… 🙂 awesomely crafted…!

  7. perhaps the lock shall come after the rebirth of that house, MMT. it would happen then.

  8. I hate seeing buildings left like this. Fix them or destroy.

  9. You killed two birds with one stone…impressive haiku!!

  10. Sad… the unfortunate owners fallen in the hands of miscreants!
    Flavors of experience!

  11. The quote is so true. And an interesting shot.

  12. sad picture, but we’ll just have to pray for the victims that they can move on in life. hope you can visit my My Ruby Tuesday here.

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