Courage in the Walls

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all the little mice
skittering after midnight
courage in the walls

 
Text © 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
More Sensational Haiku Wednesday: “Courage”

Posted on August 7, 2012, in haiku, Sensational Haiku Wednesday. Bookmark the permalink. 15 Comments.

  1. ooh, I don’t know if I really like that! The plumber left a bunch of holes in my wall looking for several leaks and there was evidence of one of those little critters in my sink! The only comfort I have is the cat I gave DH this year loves to hunt! But I’ll feel a lot better when all the holes are patched.

  2. They are fast,they are nippy. They move around happily. We are the ones who feel threatened. Nice write MMT

    Hank

  3. quite right – our screams terrify them. Brilliant haiku

  4. Love the “wink” of that last line! A fun haiku!

  5. hee hee! fun haiku!
    reminded me of 3 blind mice!

  6. Well that is quite the ‘ditty’ ~ LOL ~ (A Creative Harbor)

  7. Great fun. I hope they got the cheese.

  8. Just Awesome..a real different take! 😀

  9. I can hear them, those courageous mice! like it alot

  10. I don’t like those little mice! I do, however, think it is a fun haiku!

  11. great haiku.. I can hear them now

  12. We’ve got to give the mice that acknowledgement! Brave little foragers, defying the house cats!

  13. I have heard that skittering all too often! You captured it exactly.

    Sorry I’ve been AWOL, my friend.

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