A Long Loneliness

Haiku Heights
 
 

praying for thunder
dust clouds blotting out the sun—
a long loneliness

 
© 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
 
More September Heights: “Loneliness”

Posted on September 3, 2012, in haiku, Haiku Heights, September Heights. Bookmark the permalink. 17 Comments.

  1. Rain and thunder are so needed at times !!!

  2. I like the image of the dust clouds blotting out the sun ~

  3. “a long loneliness.’ evokes so much feeling.

  4. Good example of loneliness from nature perspective!

    Lonely girl

  5. I really enjoyed the way you painted a picture with this Haiku to capture the feeling of being lonely.

  6. Boy, everything is lonely, missing the rain

  7. love the way you play with words to portray such intense feelings…

  8. Awesome … Nice one, painted a wonderful image … what a loneliness if you’re longing for rain and thunder … very strong.

  9. hopefully, thunder won’t take long. Great haiku!

  10. Powerful imagery. Mine touched on clouds too.

  11. I can imagine people in parts of the world feeling just like this, lost in the dust, praying for relief. Nice one.

  12. Liking it so much it gave me an idea of my own good write

  13. Beautiful description of drought!

  14. I hate thunder, but I don’t mind the rain, and I like your haiku.

  15. I have certainly been longing for the company of rain this summer. Nicely done.

  16. Very evocative. You are good at these!

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