A Threesome

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How can these three crows
take up their morning banter?
Corn cries out for rain.
 
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Three crickets chiming
fulfill their evening duty—
Milky Way swirls on.
 
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From inside yourself,
element by element,
draw the Spirit’s breath.

 
© 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
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Posted on September 5, 2012, in haiku, Haiku Heights, senryu, Sensational Haiku Wednesday, September Heights, Three Word Wednesday. Bookmark the permalink. 25 Comments.

  1. Excellent, all three. I was going to say which one was my favorite, but when I re-read them I couldn’t decide. I give each one a “10.”

  2. I love the sound of the crickets, but the third is my favorite.

  3. beautiful displays of nature.Well done.

  4. Love the third one the most. The other two are also well written.

  5. A good set … the 3rd one is my favorite 🙂

  6. haiku #3 has become my mantra – thank you, MM

  7. Great set. The third is wonderful, a mantra indeed, as Paige said!

  8. I always enjoy all of your haiku very much. Today the third one is my favourite too.

  9. Like them all, but my vote goes to the crows.

  10. I don’t think I could pick a favorite from these. They are all quite beautiful.

  11. Charming, all. I’d like to watch those crows discuss the morning.

  12. All three are wonderful! Good job!

  13. All beautiful! But I could relate to the 3rd the most.

  14. Lovely set specially the second one about crickets ~

  15. Lovely set you have there. Nicely done 🙂

  16. I like the three crickets!

  17. I really loved the third one…its like meditation…..though other two are also beautiful… 🙂

  18. The last one was beautiful 🙂

  19. very nice collection

  20. The last one especially spiritual. The breath is the key.

  21. I like that.. the world lives as the galaxy continues to as well. 🙂

  22. beautiful–all three!! I like the sound of crickets as evening light takes hold.

  23. Nice! I like “Milky way swirls on” best 🙂

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