Discarded fence wire, Sonoran Desert, Southern Arizona

For revelation
I sought the tangled fence wire,
but found only lies.

Text and photo © 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
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Posted on September 13, 2012, in Arizona, Ein Stück Himmel, fence, Friday's Fences, Haiku Heights, Himmelsk, senryu, September Heights, Sky Watch Friday, Sonoran Desert, Southern Arizona. Bookmark the permalink. 39 Comments.

  1. Wow! Good work! Awesome!

  2. So difficult it is today to find purity and truth!

    Easy wings flutter to the Sun

  3. So mysterious! But I like it a lot, as usual!

  4. That last line was lovely ~

  5. beautiful lines…awesome thought..touched my heart,it did!

  6. Burn all those lies..get unentangled..please..MMT..


  7. Awesome haiku MMT … love the imagery you have used here ‘tangled fence wire, but found only lies’.

  8. Once again you trip the form lightly with wonderful results.


  9. Thought provoking. There’s an obscurity to the message that is very intriguing. I like it.

  10. That is soooooo cool!!

  11. Ah.. so where do we find what we seek?

  12. Yes, where can we look and find no lies. A thought provoking write today.

  13. Great shor and interesting poem!! Boom & Gary of the Vermilon River, Canada.

  14. I have a photo a lot like this one…
    I love the clouds in yours, though!!

  15. Lovely angle. Learning a lot from you 🙂

  16. Very creative…your words really match the photo!

  17. Can you imagine this as a jigsaw puzzle…

  18. Wonderful shot and haiku.

  19. We have to be alert most times, obviously! Nicely MMT


  20. Love the contrast in this…

  21. Wonderful and creative shot!

  22. Interesting way to put together ‘tangled, wire and lies.’

  23. this wire mesh makes a perfect foreground for a lovely sky.

  24. Tremendous haiku – though I’d rather not have found lies! 🙂

  25. Wow … what a strong revelation !!!

  26. Your words are always profound – and your photos interesting…great job!

  27. Awesome and powerful play on words. Well done

  28. whoa! deep… Norma Ruttan Come visit my blog at…


  29. Absolutely gorgeous!

    Hope you’d come and see my sky shots also. Your comment will be greatly appreciated.

    Have a great weekend!

  30. A thought provoking verse.. nicely done

  31. really liking how solid this is

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