Revelation

Sep 13

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Tangled

Discarded fence wire, Sonoran Desert, Southern Arizona
 


For revelation
I sought the tangled fence wire,
but found only lies.

 
Text and photo © 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
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Posted on September 13, 2012, in Arizona, Ein Stück Himmel, fence, Friday's Fences, Haiku Heights, Himmelsk, senryu, September Heights, Sky Watch Friday, Sonoran Desert, Southern Arizona. Bookmark the permalink. 39 Comments.

  1. Marianne | September 13, 2012 at 11:34 am

    Wow! Good work! Awesome!

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  2. Pranita | September 13, 2012 at 12:35 pm

    So difficult it is today to find purity and truth!

    Easy wings flutter to the Sun

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  3. Barbara | September 13, 2012 at 12:40 pm

    So mysterious! But I like it a lot, as usual!

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  4. Grace | September 13, 2012 at 12:44 pm

    That last line was lovely ~

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  5. Sanjana | September 13, 2012 at 12:56 pm

    beautiful lines…awesome thought..touched my heart,it did!

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  6. Ramesh Sood | September 13, 2012 at 1:01 pm

    Burn all those lies..get unentangled..please..MMT..

    RS:)

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  7. Chèvrefeuille | September 13, 2012 at 1:33 pm

    Awesome haiku MMT … love the imagery you have used here ‘tangled fence wire, but found only lies’.

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  9. Cassiopeia Rises | September 13, 2012 at 3:09 pm

    Once again you trip the form lightly with wonderful results.

    Melanie

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  10. Patti | September 13, 2012 at 3:25 pm

    Thought provoking. There’s an obscurity to the message that is very intriguing. I like it.

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  11. Ramona | September 13, 2012 at 4:34 pm

    That is soooooo cool!!

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  12. Leo | September 13, 2012 at 4:56 pm

    Ah.. so where do we find what we seek?

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  14. elleceef | September 13, 2012 at 5:19 pm

    Yes, where can we look and find no lies. A thought provoking write today.

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  15. Boom & Gary | September 13, 2012 at 5:37 pm

    Great shor and interesting poem!! Boom & Gary of the Vermilon River, Canada.

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  16. Judy | September 13, 2012 at 6:15 pm

    I have a photo a lot like this one…
    I love the clouds in yours, though!!

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  17. meowpurrs | September 13, 2012 at 6:42 pm

    Lovely angle. Learning a lot from you 🙂

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  18. Janis | September 13, 2012 at 6:55 pm

    Very creative…your words really match the photo!

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  20. Rose | September 13, 2012 at 8:33 pm

    Can you imagine this as a jigsaw puzzle…

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  21. Marie | September 13, 2012 at 8:48 pm

    Wonderful shot and haiku.

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  22. kaykuala | September 13, 2012 at 9:06 pm

    We have to be alert most times, obviously! Nicely MMT

    Hank

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  23. kkkkaty | September 13, 2012 at 9:28 pm

    Love the contrast in this…

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  24. lina@women | September 13, 2012 at 9:29 pm

    Wonderful and creative shot!

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  25. Hazel Anastasia | September 13, 2012 at 9:44 pm

    Interesting way to put together ‘tangled, wire and lies.’

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  27. Luna Miranda | September 14, 2012 at 12:33 am

    this wire mesh makes a perfect foreground for a lovely sky.

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  28. vivinfrance | September 14, 2012 at 1:27 am

    Tremendous haiku – though I’d rather not have found lies! 🙂

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  29. Green Speck | September 14, 2012 at 1:57 am

    Wow … what a strong revelation !!!

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  30. Linda | September 14, 2012 at 3:36 am

    Your words are always profound – and your photos interesting…great job!

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  31. readinpleasure | September 14, 2012 at 4:27 am

    Awesome and powerful play on words. Well done

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  34. scrappygrams | September 14, 2012 at 7:13 am

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  36. Rose Cottrill | September 14, 2012 at 11:21 am

    Absolutely gorgeous!

    Hope you’d come and see my sky shots also. Your comment will be greatly appreciated.

    Have a great weekend!
    Rose

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  37. odyzz | September 14, 2012 at 11:46 am

    A thought provoking verse.. nicely done

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  39. Bruce Ruston | September 15, 2012 at 11:31 pm

    really liking how solid this is

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