Haiku Heights

A dream of new birth:
My feet are no longer my own—
I wake up flying.

© 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
More September Heights: “Birth”

Posted on September 21, 2012, in Haiku Heights, senryu, September Heights and tagged . Bookmark the permalink. 15 Comments.

  1. That sounds like a wonderful dream! Lovely.

  2. How I would love to have that happen. “I wake up flying”. So good.

  3. I’m in! How can I get me some of this dream!

  4. I think all humans miss a pair of good wings!
    Spiritual haiku, your dream came true, lovely.

  5. Like LIKE.!!

  6. Wonderful lines. An airplane taking off with me aboard would be probably what I’d feel like if I woke up flying.

  7. Feet gives way to wings … wonderful!

  8. Wouldn’t that be a wonderful thing? 🙂

  9. Lovely, full of hopes and dreams 🙂

  10. Love this! A great twist on the flying dream.

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