Brambles

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Does Moses believe
he hears a holy rumbling
among the brambles?
 
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Penitent pilgrims
lashing themselves with brambles—
their backs bloom with blood.
 
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Is this your tribute
to the high and holy One—
these deadly brambles?

 
© 2013 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
More Sensational Haiku Wednesday: “Bramble”
 
More Three Word Wednesday: “Believe, Penitent, Tribute”

Posted on May 1, 2013, in senryu, Sensational Haiku Wednesday, Three Word Wednesday and tagged , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 12 Comments.

  1. very beautiful and very true! most of our holy teachings have been just misinterpreted and misused!

  2. I have never understood the point of flagellation. It makes no sense to God or man.

  3. A very interesting take on the prompt. Nicely done!

  4. an interesting comment on how some choose to interpret

  5. That first verse is just so..well..magical..and thoughtful..

  6. I have always thought that Moses, et al, were all schizophrenic and were hallucinating and hearing voices….

  7. I loved the alliteration as “their backs bloom with blood”.

  8. Nice haikus, and yes, I’ve often wondered how abusing God’s creation is a tribute to God.

  9. nice and a significant take, mmt…. very interesting to say the least.:))

  10. Oh my…such intensity. Love all three. And another reason to visit you now.

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