Three Storms


the storm’s destruction
how the midnight ravaging
cries out for healing
~~ ~~ ~~
a lanky stranger
an impending thunderstorm
alarm bells clanging
~~ ~~ ~~
her ultimatum
delivered during a storm
of venomous words

© 2013 by Magical Mystical Teacher
More Sensational Haiku Wednesday: “Storm”
More Three Word Wednesday: “Destruction, Lanky, Ultimatum”

Posted on May 8, 2013, in haiku, senryu, Sensational Haiku Wednesday, Three Word Wednesday and tagged , . Bookmark the permalink. 14 Comments.

  1. Worth waiting for. Quite violently descriptive. Um! Where’s ‘lanky’?

  2. This offering is dramatic and builds brilliantly from one image and story to the next.

  3. I love that you have some many takes on the prompt. There are many types of storms.

  4. all feature different types of storms well done

  5. Nice… I especially like the third one.

  6. The first one is incredible and I feel the emotion of the third. Where is your book? I’d be the first in line.

  7. Love them all

  8. The three storms are perfect by themselves but I also see a strange inter connection, telling a story of him overpowering her to destruction!!

  9. I would want to stay out of the storm of venomous words!

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