Helpless against God,
the old fighter surrenders
heart, mind, soul and strength.
~~ ~~ ~~
Trample the vintage—
refreshing rivers will flow
for the thirsty ones.
~~ ~~ ~~
vigilant pilgrim
striding through the wilderness
singing to her staff

© 2013 by Magical Mystical Teacher
More Three Word Wednesday: “Helpless, Trample, Vigilant”

Posted on May 15, 2013, in senryu, Three Word Wednesday and tagged . Bookmark the permalink. 11 Comments.

  1. The last selection sings to me most. Thanks for the read.

  2. Lovely threesome..and I am not surprised…you always come out with special creations…Well done.. I am back to 3ww here..not a haiku..this time..


  3. The last verse made me feel giddy..all she needed within her..her belief and conviction propelling her forward..what we all need!

  4. Each is so unique… can’t choose a favorite this week, love them all.

  5. ‘Helpless against God’ Resonant for me at this time!

  6. I love #2. And I really like #3 as well.

  7. I felt great hope in my image of that pilgrim!

  8. The last three lines were my favourite. Good work with the prompt.

  9. Loved them all But I love number 2 and three is the way I think we should be living

  10. These are fun. I considered trying to do something like what you did in #2, but you did it better than I would’ve.

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