Deeper
Pedestrians on a riverine path near Cache la Poudre River, Fort Collins, Colorado
crossing the footbridge
a sound that comes unbidden …
my wild beating heart*
deeper into the shadows
lured by a lone raven’s call
*Opening gambit by Laura R. Williams of Look for a Lovely Thing
Final two lines and photo © 2013 by Magical Mystical Teacher
More Carpe Diem Tan Renga: “Crossing the Footbridge”
Posted on November 14, 2013, in Cache la Poudre River, Carpe Diem, Colorado, Fort Collins, tan renga and tagged call, footbridge, heart, lone, lured, raven, shadows, sound, wild. Bookmark the permalink. 22 Comments.
Nice. Getting lured by her call is alright. 🙂
I’m glad you think so! 😉
beautiful words, MMT. WOW.
I feel honored by your comment. Thank you.
Ooooo, “lured by the call of Raven”- I love that!
I sort of suspected you would! 😉
Oh that would lure me deeper into the shadows too! 🙂
Some people run from ravens. Obviously, you’re not one of them!
Edgar Allen Poe… ish.. I don’t know what a raven sounds like, but I’d like to.
If you know crows, you know ravens! 😉
Raven can be powerful and alluring ~ fits with the ‘feeling and emotions’ of wild beating heart’ ~ well done ~ carol, xxx
Thanks for commenting on my blog too ~ brought a smile to my face your reaction to my lines ~ ^_^
what’s that lone raven up to….evil moments descending :0
I wonder why it is that ravens get such a bad rap. Aren’t they among the most intelligent birds?
I shudder to think of what awaits! Beautifully done!
Don’t you just love those little frissons of fear? 😉
hmm…I would not feel the invitation when given by a raven
Some would, some wouldn’t! 😉
good completion as i see an adventure looming ahead ☺
Awesome completion of this Tan Renga. Thank you for sharing.
I bet they were bird-watchers 🙂
Don’t birdwatcher hate ravens? 😉
Depends.. if they have seen the raven or not….