Deeper

 photo Riverwalk_zps40cf4325.jpg
Pedestrians on a riverine path near Cache la Poudre River, Fort Collins, Colorado
 
crossing the footbridge
a sound that comes unbidden …
my wild beating heart*


deeper into the shadows
lured by a lone raven’s call

*Opening gambit by Laura R. Williams of Look for a Lovely Thing
 
Final two lines and photo © 2013 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
More Carpe Diem Tan Renga: “Crossing the Footbridge”

Posted on November 14, 2013, in Cache la Poudre River, Carpe Diem, Colorado, Fort Collins, tan renga and tagged , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 22 Comments.

  1. Nice. Getting lured by her call is alright. 🙂

  2. Look for A Lovely Thing

    beautiful words, MMT. WOW.

  3. Ooooo, “lured by the call of Raven”- I love that!

  4. Oh that would lure me deeper into the shadows too! 🙂

  5. Edgar Allen Poe… ish.. I don’t know what a raven sounds like, but I’d like to.

  6. Raven can be powerful and alluring ~ fits with the ‘feeling and emotions’ of wild beating heart’ ~ well done ~ carol, xxx
    Thanks for commenting on my blog too ~ brought a smile to my face your reaction to my lines ~ ^_^

  7. what’s that lone raven up to….evil moments descending :0

  8. I shudder to think of what awaits! Beautifully done!

  9. hmm…I would not feel the invitation when given by a raven

  10. good completion as i see an adventure looming ahead ☺

  11. Awesome completion of this Tan Renga. Thank you for sharing.

  12. I bet they were bird-watchers 🙂

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