Poudre woodland photo Poudrewoodland_zps23ccdad4.jpg
Pool in woodlands near Cache la Poudre River, Fort Collins, Colorado
by the shallow pond
reflection drawing northern fowl
a warm sun shimmers*

hiding the stars in their wings
ten thousand migrating geese

*Opening gambit by Joanne Moceri-Taveira of 4JOY
Final two lines and photo © 2013 by Magical Mystical Teacher
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Posted on November 17, 2013, in Cache la Poudre River, Carpe Diem, Colorado, Fort Collins, Postcards from Paradise, Recuerda Mi Corazon, Shadow Shot Sunday 2, tan renga and tagged , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 27 Comments.

  1. What a stunning image to picture in one’s mind – the geese hiding the stars in their wings. Wowzers!

  2. Love the image of geese hiding stars. Beautiful

  3. hiding the stars in their wings
    ten thousand migrating geese

    stunning how you just took my breath away.

  4. Look for A Lovely Thing

    the magic of ten thousand and star hiding geese. Just lovely, MMT.

  5. Beautiful second stanza mmt … makes the Tan Renga even nicer in it’s scenery.

  6. About ten of them
    flew over here yesterday.
    Honk HONK HoNK honking.

  7. I like that hiding the stars in their wings. ..

  8. I love when you do that! 🙂 Thank you!

  9. love the earthy colours ‘below’ your verse of geese wings

    much love

  10. yes ..countless like the stars……it would be spectacular if the scene could be seen at night… grand lines…

    • magicalmysticalteacher

      You couldn’t see it at night, because the geese are hiding the stars in their wings! 😉 Thanks so much for your visit!

  11. I’ll never think of geese the same, again. That was very beautiful. I love the picture you painted with words.

  12. I still get pleasure from seeing geese or ducks flying in their v-formation! Is this photo yours? I love the textures found in it.

  13. Brilliant imagery MMT!

  14. heartwarming completion, thanks

  15. Wow! They could sail away with the whole night sky. This is stunning.

  16. Starlight a geese goes so well together.

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