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in the backyard
a rainbow in the birdbath breaks—
a sipping magpie

seven broken soldiers come
to drink the healing waters

*Opening gambit © by Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #31
Final two lines © 2014 by Magical Mystical Teacher

Posted on April 18, 2014, in Carpe Diem, tan renga and tagged , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 6 Comments.

  1. Excellent !

  2. Beautifully done. Love the image of the rainbow in the birdbath.

  3. Wow! What a wonderful second stanza mmt … I am in awe.

  4. This is a wonderful completion — any time, but especially in the time frame of the Holy Season of Easter!

  5. Oh, but for naught the need of soldiers…

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