Clearing

Day's end photo AnzaBodaysend_zpsfd3ba13b.jpg
Late summer twilight, Anza-Borrego Desert State Park, Southern California
 


clearing the flyway
for every star in waiting
crow’s persistent cry

 
Text and photo © 2014 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
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More Haiku Horizons: “Clear”

Posted on September 4, 2014, in 5-7-5, Anza-Borrego Desert, California, Haiku Horizons, Sky Watch Friday, Southern California, sundown, twilight and tagged , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 18 Comments.

  1. What a beautiful haiku, each line I have to stop and imagine and I hear that persistent crow too.

  2. ((SIGH)) This grabbed my heart. Wonderful sense of ah ha with the last line. Well done.

  3. Fantastic capture and beautiful haiku indeed!! Perfect, as always! Have a lovely weekend!!

  4. Beautiful SWF contribution!

  5. Lovely twilight sky for SWF ~ happy weekend to you!

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

  6. The persistent cawing of the crow is a bleak image.you have created an ominous mood.

  7. eerie scene with nothing in the sky

  8. There is a feeling of slowing and slipping into sleep in this scene. Lovely atmosphere.

  9. Lovely scenery … ‘crow’s persistent cry’ – imagery at its peak 🙂

  10. This is beautiful. Simple and yet so deep.

    Melanie
    bd

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