Bare Branches

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Bare branches touch
Over the lane where we walk
Fingers entwined.

 
docile calico kitten
padding along behind us

 
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Bare branches touch
Over the lane where we walk
Fingers entwined.

 
inflicting on each other
our foxy little hearts

 
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Bare branches touch
Over the lane where we walk
Fingers entwined.

 
a whimper from the graveyard
making us tighten our grip

 
 
*Opening gambit (“Bare branches touch,” etc.) © by Jackie Le Poidevin
 
 
Final two lines of each set © 2015 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
More Three Word Wednesday: “Docile, Inflict, Whimper”
 
More Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge: “Bare Branches Touch”

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Posted on February 25, 2015, in Carpe Diem, tan renga, Three Word Wednesday and tagged , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 9 Comments.

  1. Hopefully the whimper from the grave yard was above the ground…which is quite natural.

  2. Foxy little hearts…what an air of mischief…i hadn’t thought of a graveyard as good dating scenario but obviously it has its bonuses! 😉

    • magicalmysticalteacher

      Well, the graveyard certainly has its bones, but beyond that…

      On Wed, Feb 25, 2015 at 6:12 AM, Magical Mystical Teacher wrote:

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  3. Beautifully written, but think I’d avoid that lane in future if I were you. It could just be the place where my baddie got his come up-ance in my tale this week!

  4. I like the kitten and the unnerving of the graveyard.

  5. Oooooh, that middle one seemed so enthralling, too bad you got scared:) Lovely series!

  6. What a splendid series. Love the kitty padding behind.

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