Melancholy Whore

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Melancholy whore,
annoyed with bargain hunters,
shuts down for the night.
~~ ~~ ~~
Melancholy whore,
hushed after her performance,
smokes a cigarette.
~~ ~~ ~~
Melancholy whore—
the pain of indiscretion
pressing down on her.

© 2015 by Magical Mystical Teacher
More Carpe Diem: “Melancholy”
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Posted on March 18, 2015, in 5-7-5, Carpe Diem, Three Word Wednesday and tagged , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 14 Comments.

  1. poor woman. great lines

  2. We can be a whore in many ways..i believe it will always lead to lack of choice tends to perhaps?

  3. Ok, I did not expect a whore haiku. The unexpected twist made me smile though the fact is sobering. Great read.

  4. The last one – not a whore at all. Pressure? 😉

    • magicalmysticalteacher

      I think you might be right…

      On Wed, Mar 18, 2015 at 1:16 PM, Magical Mystical Teacher wrote:


  5. Whore is such an ugly word especially when needs are satisfied. Not that I would know anything about that of course.

  6. Interesting take! Well done!

  7. Oh I did enjoy this series!!!

  8. Now that was different! What a great take.

  9. I just reread this and love it een more!

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