Fawn

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fawn on the mountain—
hunter hidden in the dark
raises his rifle
 
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lonely little fawn
trying to nurse its mother
after the kill shot
 
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no boring ending
to the story of the fawn—
a day of vengeance

 
© 2015 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
More Carpe Diem: “Fawn”
 
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Posted on July 15, 2015, in 5-7-5, Carpe Diem, Three Word Wednesday and tagged , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 13 Comments.

  1. Yogi | July 15, 2015 at 5:28 am

    This doesn’t sound good for the deer.

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  2. Cressida | July 15, 2015 at 6:38 am

    Aha…Bambi revisited:)

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  3. oldegg | July 15, 2015 at 6:41 am

    Let’s be flippant and say “Oh Dear”! Wild animal hunting is quite repugnant especially when is serves absolutely no purpose whatsoever.

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  4. Jae Rose | July 15, 2015 at 6:43 am

    I like this new version…may Bambi take a rifle to the mother killer…

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  5. Anya Padyam | July 15, 2015 at 7:34 am

    Very creative story telling 🙂

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  6. Gillena Cox | July 15, 2015 at 7:58 am

    nice haiku tale; twist of fate to mother child relationships, happens

    have a good Wednesday

    much love…

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  7. Sheilagh Lee | July 15, 2015 at 9:48 am

    ooh revenge in the end for Bambi

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  9. jazzytower | July 15, 2015 at 3:48 pm

    Aah! A beginnig, middle and end, the full story..sad though.

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  10. kaykuala h | July 15, 2015 at 9:25 pm

    It is a tragedy when animals are hunted in the wild. Their young are in no position to survive without the mother doe. Good for highlighting this MMT!

    Hank

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  11. moondustwriter | July 16, 2015 at 2:58 pm

    I have two fawn just born in our back – they are so dependent. Im amazed any of them survive. cars are what kill our deer.

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  12. Ira PT | July 17, 2015 at 11:58 am

    Lovely Haiku tale – Sad but true across species…

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  13. kalpana solsi | July 18, 2015 at 1:35 pm

    The hunter satisfied his skill of hunting but the poor deer has its life and the fawn is orphaned. Hunting should be strictly banned.

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