Pyramid

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Climbing the pyramid at La Cañada de la Virgen, San Miguel de Allende, Guanajuato, México
 


addicted to heights
climbers on the pyramid
scrambling to the top
 
~~ ~~ ~~
 
Defiant climbers—
nothing can stop their ascent
of the pyramid.
 
~~ ~~ ~~
 
Leaving the world’s filth,
they seek the holy precincts
of the pyramid.

 
Text and photo © 2015 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
More Carpe Diem: “The Great Pyramid of Giza”
 
More Three Word Wednesday: “Addicted, Defiant, Filth”

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Posted on August 5, 2015, in 5-7-5, Carpe Diem, Three Word Wednesday and tagged , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 14 Comments.

  1. Awesome!!! I wondered how you would fit “filth” without losing the mood…lovely, beautifully penned.

    • magicalmysticalteacher

      I rather wondered that myself! 😉

      On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 3:02 AM, Magical Mystical Teacher wrote:

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  2. I only hope they are not disappointed when they reach the top..seems bizarre if you think of it…but everything has a purpose i suppose

    • magicalmysticalteacher

      And some things have a porpoise—Alice should know! 😉

      On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 5:28 AM, Magical Mystical Teacher wrote:

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  3. A beautiful trio of haiku mmt, but that third haiku is very strong with a spiritual layer … nicely done.

  4. really nice climbing ku

    much love…

  5. Perhaps they find solace in locations of dizzying heights. Nice haiku set MMT!

    Hank

  6. Though lame and lazy, I, too, would be compelled to climb.

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