Curve

May 26

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Swing set at dawn, Southern Arizona
 
 


yesterday’s laughter
echoing in the swing chains—
the curve of each note
 
~~ ~~ ~~
 
yesterday’s menu
still swirling round the playground—
Sunday school picnic

 
Haiku and photo © 2016 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
 
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Posted on May 26, 2016, in 5-7-5, Arizona, Haiku Horizons, Sky Watch Friday, Southern Arizona and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 12 Comments.

  1. Susan Chast | May 26, 2016 at 1:13 pm

    Sensing the fun lingering in a place feels like a gentle friendly lift.

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  2. Alex Q. Chen | May 26, 2016 at 1:54 pm

    Good use of the playground to compose the shot with the sunset. Playgrounds always bring back lots of memories for me.

    Have a wonderful weekend!

    Alexander
    Alex’s World! – http://alex.kakinan.com

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  3. Gemma Wiseman | May 26, 2016 at 3:09 pm

    A playground in silhouette tends to suggest a host of memories. Lovely scene.

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  4. JM Illinois U.S.A. | May 26, 2016 at 3:50 pm

    Chain of memories equals: silhouettes….sunsets…..curves…..mesa. Nice job.
    JM, IL

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  5. Bekkie Sanchez | May 26, 2016 at 4:05 pm

    Nice photo and I love swings! I still can remember Sunday School, thanks for the memories.

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  6. genie | May 26, 2016 at 4:42 pm

    What a beautiful sunrise. The swing chains really stand out. Your poetry is fits so well.

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  7. Peter B | May 26, 2016 at 5:51 pm

    Creatively composed photo and a beautiful sky!

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  9. Sumana Roy | May 26, 2016 at 8:09 pm

    s w e e t &beautiful though it would have been better if the left over were not around….nice photo too 🙂

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  10. uvr2002 | May 26, 2016 at 8:26 pm

    beautifully written

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  12. yogiabb | May 30, 2016 at 7:48 am

    I love the poems. I love the geometry of your photo, and the light. and just about everything about it.

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