Peering from the pines photo SoCalJune2013088a_zps3076634e.jpg
Southern California

When glimpsed through the pines,
how much longer the way seems—
pebble in my shoe.

Haiku © 2016 and photo © 2013 by Magical Mystical Teacher
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Posted on June 10, 2016, in 5-7-5, California, haiku, Haiku My Heart, Recuerda Mi Corazon, Southern California and tagged , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 8 Comments.

  1. even the slightest stone drives me to take off my shoe and shake out whatever is in it.

  2. Without that pebble… I would never stop…

  3. Beyond the shade tree the way looks long and hot. Summer in the desert. 🙂

  4. each moment holds the stars and the stones. beautiful haiku-thank you friend!

  5. The way is long and we all have pebbles in our shoes. I loved this!

  6. This view looks like the way is long…..but If the camera is on the ground it may only be one step. Perspective doesn’t ease the pebble problem though does it?

  7. nice shot, makes me want to go and see what’s beyond

  8. Sometimes, the larger the stone, the softer the ache.

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