Blue Monday: Shoe

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Lost shoe, somewhere in California

A runner slipped out of her shoe—
A pity, because it is blue.
Her foot is now bare,
She’s nothing to wear
Until she buys footwear anew.

Photo and limerick © 2017 by Magical Mystical Teacher
More Poetry Pantry #366 at Poets United


Posted on August 7, 2017, in Blue Monday, California, limerick, Poetry Pantry, Poets United and tagged , , . Bookmark the permalink. 24 Comments.

  1. Very clever rhyme! Wonder how that shoe got lost?

  2. Thanks most sincerely for hosting, sweetest friend of mine, and forgive my delay with this comment, I was far too sure to have posted it !!!

    Wishing you a most lovely new week ahead,
    I’m sending blessings on your way

    XOXO Daniela

  3. LOL, I wonder how it was she didnt notice one foot was bare………..maybe she was hoping The Prince would find it!

  4. Oh this is so clever! LOve seeing all the blues. Have a great week and thank you for hosting.

  5. Good find.
    Thank you for hosting.

  6. Nice. Love the blue and yellow combo.

  7. Fun! I’d walk in bare feet always…ah, summer

  8. This is a good, fun, poem.

  9. I often wonder how shoes are lost in fields or by the side of the rode.

  10. That’s a nice write!

  11. I enjoyed the re-read just as much! Thank you.

  12. Love limericking! My husband always wonders what it does to the ex-wearer’s psyche when we find one shoe on a trail or in the gutter. And why the lone shoe was shed. Always a puzzle.

  13. Haha less wine and more shmooooo.
    Enjoyed this in my imagination too. ❤

  14. I wonder how she didn’t notice she had lost a shoe…fun limerick.

  15. Hurry before they’re out of blur skoes

  16. Interesting limerick; and I am sure there must be a story behind that lone shoe!

  17. Nothing worse than losing a shoe.. I hope she finds another pair!

  18. My mind was more on the plants that just stood by thinking: Is this good or bad for us? Deciding in the end it will be good as there will be moisture under the shoe that they can tap when the heat rises.

    • magicalmysticalteacher

      Your mind travels in strange channels, Old Egg! 😉

      On Sun, Aug 13, 2017 at 8:38 PM, Magical Mystical Teacher wrote:


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