An abandoned car rusts in Ajo, Arizona

Haiga © 2018 by Magical Mystical Teacher
More Midweek Motif at Poets United: “Color”

Posted on March 21, 2018, in 5-7-5, Ajo, Arizona, haiga, haiku, Midweek Motif, Poets United and tagged , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 16 Comments.

  1. Lisa at Greenbow

    I bet there is a whole colony of mice in that vehicle. What a nice car. I can imagine it all painted up going to the Frog Follies.

  2. A great find, surely 🙂

  3. SWEET! To find a home adds a bit of lustre.

  4. colourless morning..yes!!!

  5. a treasure for sure… surely it has more to offer than a mouse house… 🙂

  6. I love the colorless mouse-house. So like New Mexico!

  7. Wonderful haiku! I love it.

  8. That’s putting colour into the morning. Not at all colourless after your haiku moment

    Thanks for this. Happy Wednesday MMT


  9. A large abode for an orphan. Lovely haiku.

  10. Oh, poor mouse! LOVE the photo! wow.

  11. The morning may be colourless but the car has a luster of rust – lucky mouse!

  12. The colour of rust out wreck is a nice one.

  13. I think there might be more that mice in the car, slithering around!

  14. I love poems about rusted things. This was truly a great pic and poem. I imagine a few mice and maybe a snake or two live in this car.

  15. Rosemary Nissen-Wade

    Happy mouse – that rusting car is a wonderful colour. 🙂

  16. I love this! I hope the mouse is comfy and warm in his new home.

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