Wine into Water


Water heals her wound
the evidence comes
as a scar blossoms in her flesh
like smoke rising
from burning leaves
it has been a long struggle
sometimes she dreams
of lying in her casket
when this nightmare is over
but for now her thoughts are clearing
maybe Jesus is turning her wine
into water

 
  

Poem © 2019 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
 
More Sunday’s Whirligig #243
 
More Pantry of Poetry and Prose #7 at Poets United

 

Posted on December 8, 2019, in poetry, Poetry Pantry, Poets United, Sunday's Whirligig and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 15 Comments.

  1. Wonderful faith. Happy 2nd Sunday of Advent

    Much👼🏽love

  2. This is beautifully deep! ❤️

  3. Love in increasing clarity, regardless of all else. Salute!

  4. A message of hope in dark times. Good one!

  5. Lisa at Greenbow

    Sad scary poem with a hint of better times to come.

  6. Oh, I love the surprise of your closing lines.

  7. This is fantastic! Finally, someone points out the raw deal of having water turned to wine. May the water flow…

  8. Lovely. Wine into water may be the healing we all need.

  9. Excuse me for laughing but that is certainly a miracle we need when we get too garrulous.

  10. Thanks for the cute noodles….
    the writing is deep.

  11. A very thoughtful and compelling piece … and that close … has taken my in a labyrinth of directions.

  12. The close is powerful and hopeful… nicely done!!!

  13. Vivid imagery. It reads like an exhale.

  14. This is intense. The imagery puts me in mind of a struggling alcoholic, hoping to make it past one more temptation.

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