Ordinary Moments
1.
The bread remembers
when it was grain in the field—
autumn abundance.
2.
On my autumn walk
I found a breath the raven
left beside the path
3.
For smudging ourselves,
we gather some mountain sage—
November blessing.
4.
Autumn afternoon—
a story told by strangers
causes me to smile.
© 2022 by Magical Mystical Teacher
More The Whirligig #397
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More Friday Writings #53 at Poets and Storytellers United
More The Whirligig #397
More Haiku My Heart at Recuerda Mi Corazon
More Friday Writings #53 at Poets and Storytellers United
Posted on November 18, 2022, in 5-7-5, haiku, Haiku My Heart, Poets & Storytellers United, Recuerda Mi Corazon, The Whirligig and tagged haiku, ordinary, writing prompt. Bookmark the permalink. 9 Comments.
Nice work(s), Teach. #3’s my fave.
Such sweet simple remembrances that uplift me.
How lovely!!!!! Mountain sage is my favorite.
I love them all… but the grain remembering is my favorite this morning. Thank you dear MMT!
How beautifully you take us with you through your walk / afternoon /season.
That last haiku is really speaking to me… I always love to hear (parts of) stories that strangers tell to each other and that I hear in trains or on a terrace… enjoy your weekend dear, hug from Holland.
The first one is my favorite too, but these are all lovely snapshots of fall.
#2 I like especially. The breath of the raven, so very nice.
feeling immense gratitude for you and every gem you spin into gold!