Creatures Great and Small

Nov 27

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curious weaving—
two whales swimming side by side
in the tapestry
 
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inevitable—
the birds that followed Jesus
pecking at my eyes
 
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wary and alert
two flies meeting for breakfast
in the sugar bowl

 
© 2013 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
More Three Word Wednesday: “Curious, Inevitable, Wary”

Posted on November 27, 2013, in 5-7-5, Three Word Wednesday and tagged , , . Bookmark the permalink. 9 Comments.

  1. Irene Golembo (@reikimuse) | November 27, 2013 at 6:59 am

    First – like surprising 2&3 lines; Second – scary, are you on the way?; Third – fun! I want to know the story! 🙂 Enjoyed.

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  2. Sheilagh Lee | November 27, 2013 at 11:46 am

    flies and birds oh my! ooh some story there. I love the tapestry that you weave with your haikus.

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  3. rmp | November 27, 2013 at 12:17 pm

    That second one made me flinch a bit. I like that you started each of the pieces with one of the words. You definitely captured these creatures (great and small) in an unique way.

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  4. Jae Rose | November 27, 2013 at 1:02 pm

    Pesky flies in the sugar bowl spoiling everything..plotting and planning…nicely swerved… 😉

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  5. Rallentanda | November 27, 2013 at 8:51 pm

    I like 3 as well. Flies in the sugar bowl shoo fly shoo…skip to my Lou my darlin’!

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  6. oldegg | November 27, 2013 at 11:06 pm

    The problem with flies they have probably just been to the Loo. However that was my favorite too.

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  7. Beth | November 27, 2013 at 11:29 pm

    These three brought chuckles and smiles thank you Blessings Happy Thanksgiving

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  8. kaykuala | November 28, 2013 at 4:48 pm

    Whales, birds and flies and they all come into the fray. Witty haiku set MMT! Happy Thanksgiving!

    Hank

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