Hostel Villa Colonial, Zacatecas, México

The blue-handled broom,
weary from too much sweeping,
sags in the corner
as if an afternoon nap
might help revive its bristles.

Text © 2015 and photo © 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
More Ruby Tuesday Too
More Carpe Diem: “Lost in the Woods about Tanka”

Posted on July 28, 2015, in 5-7-5-7-7, Carpe Diem, Mexico, Ruby Tuesday Too, tanka, Zacatecas and tagged , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 10 Comments.

  1. Really nice,

    Much love…

  2. Oh, I love this! Each line, each word!

  3. really great how you can take the mundane and make it beautiful

  4. lovely whimsical tanka … love it!

  5. Now something about the plunger maybe…

    • magicalmysticalteacher

      I could try, but plungers aren’t terribly poetic!

      On Sat, Aug 1, 2015 at 6:04 AM, Magical Mystical Teacher wrote:


  6. Reblogged this on personalselfperfection and commented:
    tanka funny post

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