Broom

Jul 28

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Hostel Villa Colonial, Zacatecas, México
 


The blue-handled broom,
weary from too much sweeping,
sags in the corner
as if an afternoon nap
might help revive its bristles.

 
Text © 2015 and photo © 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
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Posted on July 28, 2015, in 5-7-5-7-7, Carpe Diem, Mexico, Ruby Tuesday Too, tanka, Zacatecas and tagged , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 10 Comments.

  2. gillena | July 28, 2015 at 4:41 pm

    Really nice,

    Much love…

    Reply
  3. Candy | July 28, 2015 at 7:31 pm

    Oh, I love this! Each line, each word!

    Reply
  4. adaspoetryalcove | July 28, 2015 at 7:58 pm

    really great how you can take the mundane and make it beautiful

    Reply
  7. Bastet | July 28, 2015 at 11:55 pm

    lovely whimsical tanka … love it!

    Reply
  8. Ron. | August 1, 2015 at 7:04 am

    Now something about the plunger maybe…

    Reply
    • magicalmysticalteacher | August 1, 2015 at 7:23 am

      I could try, but plungers aren’t terribly poetic!

      On Sat, Aug 1, 2015 at 6:04 AM, Magical Mystical Teacher wrote:

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      Reply
  9. conolel | August 13, 2015 at 7:13 am

    Reblogged this on personalselfperfection and commented:
    tanka funny post

    Reply

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