Commitment

Jun 8

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Wedding at Guadalupe, Zacatecas, Mexico
 


their marital bliss
painted with commitment’s brush
outlasting the stones

 
Poem © 2016 and photo © 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
More Midweek Motif at Poets United: “Commitment”

Posted on June 8, 2016, in 5-7-5, Guadalupe, Mexico, Midweek Motif, Poets United, Zacatecas and tagged , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 18 Comments.

  1. Jae Rose | June 8, 2016 at 5:30 am

    A commitment writ in stone – if it is blushing like a bride i hoe it is good and steadfast

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  2. Sumana Roy | June 8, 2016 at 8:04 am

    that’s how it is…lovely…

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  3. Bekkie Sanchez | June 8, 2016 at 9:11 am

    Those are some mighty old stones! Congrats!

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  4. Sherry Marr | June 8, 2016 at 10:31 am

    What a beautiful couple. I am always happy to hear of commitment lasting longer than stones………

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  5. Sanaa Rizvi | June 8, 2016 at 2:37 pm

    Incredible write 😀

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  6. moondustwriter | June 8, 2016 at 3:05 pm

    They wear off on each other don’t they? Lovely haiku for the happy couple.

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  7. Susan Chast | June 8, 2016 at 3:40 pm

    How wonderful. Such is the hope, and when it really zings, it is a blessing.

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  8. oldegg | June 8, 2016 at 4:41 pm

    What a touching scene and the bridesmaids too caught my eye. Beautifully written.

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  9. Myrna Rosa | June 8, 2016 at 5:44 pm

    i wish them much happiness. I hope their love does last longer than stones. Lovely picture and writing.

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  12. Rosemary Nissen-Wade | June 8, 2016 at 9:36 pm

    Beautifully said.

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  13. Amit Agarwal | June 9, 2016 at 12:54 am

    Great thought…great haiku!

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  14. Amy | June 9, 2016 at 2:28 am

    I love her dress, very pretty

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  15. hypercryptical | June 9, 2016 at 4:42 am

    Well said – may commitment outlast each and every stone.
    Anna :o]

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  16. Mary | June 9, 2016 at 8:06 am

    What a beautiful beginning of a life-long commitment!

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  18. kaykuala (@hankkaykuala) | June 11, 2016 at 1:20 am

    Commitment transcends time and space! It may not even be uttered but just given and accepted quietly and sincerely! Rightly so MMT!

    Hank

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