Birth

Sep 21

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A dream of new birth:
My feet are no longer my own—
I wake up flying.

 
© 2012 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
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Posted on September 21, 2012, in Haiku Heights, senryu, September Heights and tagged . Bookmark the permalink. 15 Comments.

  1. Patti | September 21, 2012 at 1:10 pm

    That sounds like a wonderful dream! Lovely.

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  3. elleceef | September 21, 2012 at 4:14 pm

    How I would love to have that happen. “I wake up flying”. So good.

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  4. Barbara | September 21, 2012 at 4:55 pm

    I’m in! How can I get me some of this dream!

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  8. dulcinaandgnome | September 22, 2012 at 12:31 am

    I think all humans miss a pair of good wings!
    Spiritual haiku, your dream came true, lovely.

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  9. unfetteredbs | September 22, 2012 at 2:29 am

    Like LIKE.!!

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  10. Hazel Anastasia | September 22, 2012 at 5:07 am

    Wonderful lines. An airplane taking off with me aboard would be probably what I’d feel like if I woke up flying.

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  12. Jolly | September 22, 2012 at 7:02 am

    Feet gives way to wings … wonderful!

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  13. Christine L. Villa | September 22, 2012 at 11:38 pm

    Wouldn’t that be a wonderful thing? 🙂

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  14. ash | September 23, 2012 at 11:22 am

    Lovely, full of hopes and dreams 🙂

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  15. Teresa | September 24, 2012 at 8:26 pm

    Love this! A great twist on the flying dream.

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