Footprint

Sep 26

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Footprint in the sand—
you passed this way at midnight,
humming to the stars.

 
Text and photo © 2011 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
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More September Heights: “Footprint”

Posted on September 26, 2012, in Arizona, haiku, Haiku Heights, Northern Arizona, September Heights, Straight Out of the Camera Sunday. Bookmark the permalink. 21 Comments.

  2. Ramesh Sood | September 26, 2012 at 12:40 pm

    What an image…I can see it..and hear it…have I turned a star..

    MMT..a magical haiku this..

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  4. Susan | September 26, 2012 at 2:11 pm

    Presence! How wonderful.

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  5. Kathy Donlan | September 26, 2012 at 2:16 pm

    I like to think of the person who passed this way. Sounds like a joyful type.

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  6. elleceef | September 26, 2012 at 4:37 pm

    “humming to the stars” I love that phrase. Perfect for footprints.

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  7. Barbara | September 26, 2012 at 5:58 pm

    Mysterious perhaps the beginning of a good tale! I love the ‘humming to the stars.’

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  8. Write Girl | September 26, 2012 at 6:16 pm

    Beautiful haiku and the last line was special “humming to the stars.” Really enjoyed this one!

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  9. kaykuala | September 26, 2012 at 6:48 pm

    Yes one can feel the presence of an endearing heart. Rightly respond, he’s waiting! Nicely MMT!

    Hank

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  10. Hazel Anastasia | September 26, 2012 at 7:32 pm

    Musical, nocturnal soul that is.

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  11. Patti | September 26, 2012 at 8:08 pm

    I agree with Barbara. This sounds like the beginning of a good story.

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  13. Rallentanda | September 27, 2012 at 3:10 am

    Well you know what they say about guys with big feet:)

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  14. Chevrefeuille a.k.a Basho2012 | September 27, 2012 at 7:03 am

    MMT … this is such a nice haiku … a dream in a nutshell

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  15. Jolly | September 27, 2012 at 7:15 am

    Very poetic! I can well imagine the singing ….

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  16. Bruce Ruston | September 28, 2012 at 3:42 am

    very nice liked humming to the stars too

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  17. tigerbrite | September 28, 2012 at 7:06 am

    Humming to the stars, lovely.

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  18. odyzz | September 28, 2012 at 7:07 am

    I too enjoyed reading “humming to the stars “….lovely feel…

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  19. whistlingninja | September 28, 2012 at 11:36 am

    I enjoyed this immensely, of course when I passed that way it was after midnight and I was whistling 😉

    I didn’t comment this the first time around, perhaps because of the incongruity of the image with your poem – the image detracts a little – quite a bit in fact which is a shame.

    I always like to feel the sand! Maybe its just me!

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