Kirov

Jan 5

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Red door photo reddoorPuertoNuevo_zpsfe03a1ed.jpg
Puerto Nuevo, Baja California Norte, México
 


perhaps a loud clap
will make the door fly open—
Ali Baba knows
 
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Mermaids Coffee Shop
dreams of Kirov in the cup
swirling wisps of steam

 
Text and photo © 2014 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
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Posted on January 5, 2014, in 5-7-5, Baja California Norte, Carpe Diem, Haiku Heights, Mexico, Postcards from Paradise, Puerto Nuevo, Recuerda Mi Corazon, Ruby Tuesday Too and tagged , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 22 Comments.

  1. Cathy Tenzo | January 5, 2014 at 5:40 pm

    oh MMM, you leave me gasping in delight! And I love the photo, too.

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  2. artmusedog | January 5, 2014 at 5:56 pm

    Unique take on haiku prompt ~ xxx

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  3. rebecca | January 5, 2014 at 6:43 pm

    let’s sit here all afternoon and catch up amid wisps of steam!

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  4. jazzbumpa | January 6, 2014 at 7:41 am

    ali baba knows
    i can only drink decaf
    with sesame bun

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  6. Kalpana Solsi | January 6, 2014 at 11:51 am

    Khul ja sim sim, clapped Ali Baba,
    and there lay all the treasures,
    a pair of eyes could feast upon.

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  7. Maggie Grace | January 6, 2014 at 1:20 pm

    dreams of Kirov in the cup…lovely.

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  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) | January 6, 2014 at 1:31 pm

    Love a mermaid’s coffee shop… but I guess Kirov is not ideal for mermaids… hmm the connection to Ali Baba is great.

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  9. Gemma Wiseman | January 6, 2014 at 3:15 pm

    So we have mermaids and coffee and a door on what looks like a large garage roller door. It doesn’t get much more unique than that. Love it.

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  11. Laurie Kazmierczak | January 7, 2014 at 4:02 am

    Intriguing door with splendid prose♪ Am new to haiku….Happy 2014, still! http://lauriekazmierczak.com/taking-flight/

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  12. readinpleasure | January 7, 2014 at 8:24 am

    Great! A happy New Year to you MMT

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  13. Usha Menon | January 7, 2014 at 9:05 am

    What a unique thought! Nice!!

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  14. Gillena Cox | January 7, 2014 at 2:56 pm

    a with character; have a nice Tuesday

    much love…

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  16. justjoyfulness | January 8, 2014 at 4:11 am

    Ah! I wish all doors would open with clap 🙂 Unique take on the prompt!

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  17. oneofaclass | January 9, 2014 at 1:57 am

    i’m in a bad mood
    haven’t had coffee today
    open sesame

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  18. Englepappa | January 9, 2014 at 5:04 pm

    Nice haiku! I really like them – they are original and made me think. Thanks!

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  19. SheReef | January 10, 2014 at 3:00 am

    wonderfully composed.

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