Creeping

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Templo de la Purísima Concepción, San Miguel de Allende, Guanajuato, México
 


first evening shadows
creeping up bright painted walls
and in dead men’s shoes

 
Text and photo © 2014 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
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Posted on February 23, 2014, in 5-7-5, church, Guanajuato, Haiku Horizons, Mexico, Postcards from Paradise, Recuerda Mi Corazon, San Miguel de Allende, Shadow Shot Sunday 2, shadows, The Poetry Pantry and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 28 Comments.

  1. wow. what a last line in this one
    it changes the perspective

  2. The last line is very effective.

  3. Pretty place, Awesome captured!

    U absolutely rock, Maam MT?

    Love your arts.

    Hugs,
    /CC girl

  4. That last line *is* a grabber!
    Thanks for swinging by and contributing!

  5. Great shot of the temple.

  6. How beautiful and soulful!!!

  7. lovely and eerie! I love the shadows accenting the other side of the street’s building shapes.

  8. That last line is memorable indeed!

    Beautiful shadow shot with a hint of loneliness.

  9. Excellent imagery here. The idea of ‘dead man’s shoes’ brings the poem to another level…

  10. What a spectacular photo! The LIGHT!!!!!! especially admire the inclusion of dead men’s shoes……..

  11. That was quite a last line.

  12. Amazing photo with a great haiku. It’s good to see you on the new Haiku Horizons. I’ve missed Haiku heights. Alice

  13. That last line, damn really gave the poem that extra push!

  14. Thanks for sharing the warmth of Mexico! I can ALMOST feel it!

    • magicalmysticalteacher

      Almost? What would be the tipping point? 😉

      On Sun, Feb 23, 2014 at 5:55 PM, Magical Mystical Teacher wrote:

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  15. Oh, what is it with dead men’s shoes? Lovely photo 🙂

  16. looking at the pic we might think differently.and with ur writing it takes a complete different dimension.dxbnidblog

  17. ‘shadows creeping up’ has an eerie feel….

  18. proverbial !!! its creeping up my spine !!!

  19. Amusing. There must be a cemetery nearby.

  20. Death in orange. Nice pic.

  21. wasn’t expecting that last line Wow!!!

    much love…

    • magicalmysticalteacher

      I like to catch my readers off guard! 😉

      On Fri, Feb 28, 2014 at 5:29 AM, Magical Mystical Teacher wrote:

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