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Even with your flaws,
darkness cratering the light,
through you runs a path.

 
© 2011 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
Photo: Callejon Mono Prieto, Zacatecas, México
 
More One Single Impression poems with the theme “Crater” here
 
More Postcards from Paradise at Recuerda Mi Corazon here
 
More Haiku My Heart at Recuerda Mi Corazon here
 
More Haiku Heights with the theme “Flaw” here
 
More Straight Out of the Camera shots here
 
More Mellow Yellow Monday photos here
 
More Shadow Shot Sunday photos here
 

Posted on July 3, 2011, in Haiku Heights, Haiku My Heart, Mellow Yellow Monday, Mexico, my digital photos, my haiku, One Single Impression, Postcards from Paradise, Shadow Shot Sunday, Zacatecas. Bookmark the permalink. 41 Comments.

  1. BLOGitse | July 3, 2011 at 2:00 am

    What a beauty!
    That would be perfect art on the wall…

    ps. I did get your comment on my blog.
    I’d like to know what happened that you think it didn’t show up because I’ve complained about that issue but they didn’t find anything. Pls send me an email if you have time, thanks!

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  2. Ramesh Sood | July 3, 2011 at 3:02 am

    Wow.. both the prompts in one.. beautifully done..

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  3. Harshad | July 3, 2011 at 3:02 am

    Excellent words of compliments to someone.Beautiful.

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  4. VioletSky | July 3, 2011 at 4:12 am

    Wonderful deep shadows in this narrow street!

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  5. Hootin' Anni | July 3, 2011 at 5:45 am

    Oh wow….very, VERY dramatic!!

    Holiday Weekend Shadows is my link. Do stop by if you have some time today. I’d love to have you visit with me. Hope your day is treating you well!!!!

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  6. Anna Maria | July 3, 2011 at 5:51 am

    and we can never know where it will lead us…..beautiful photo.

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  7. Spadoman | July 3, 2011 at 6:11 am

    That’s an awesome photo. Sort of a change of pace from the church steeples and colorful Mexican plazas. Eerie, haunting, wreaks of espionage! The words are heavy duty and meaningful. Some of your best with this one.

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  8. Kim, USA | July 3, 2011 at 6:40 am

    Dark alley creepy night light

    Colors

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  10. John McElveen | July 3, 2011 at 9:28 am

    AGAIN HE SCORES!!! GREAT SHOT!!!!

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  11. John McElveen | July 3, 2011 at 9:30 am

    SORRY–MEANT “SHE” LOVE YOUR WORK AS ALWAYS!

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  12. Tatjana Parkacheva | July 3, 2011 at 11:50 am

    Very good photography.

    Regards!

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  13. Kelly | July 3, 2011 at 12:09 pm

    Oooo, now this one is mysterious! I’m always impressed with shadows taken in low light. Very nice!

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  14. rebecca | July 3, 2011 at 12:11 pm

    i want my husband to say this to me…in the dark covers of our bed, when no one else is home.

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  15. Becca Givens | July 3, 2011 at 2:16 pm

    “the light through you runs a path!”

    Nice imagery!

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  17. Nicolette | July 3, 2011 at 2:37 pm

    Wonderful photo… love the light and shadows…

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  18. sue | July 3, 2011 at 3:48 pm

    I particularly like the last line.

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  19. Jim | July 3, 2011 at 5:55 pm

    Hi MMT 🙂 ~~ I’m like your poem’s subject, I really don’t like to be easily read. Yet when people see my light and get to know me they read my like a book.

    Thank you for you nice usage of the prompt. I enjoyed reading this and finding meaning in your verse. Whether I matched your poet’s ideas remains for you to know.
    ..
    BTW, Mrs. Jim doens’t read my poems. One daughter does and I’ll catch the Dickens about it. I did make a change and offered the original 1st person version and also one changed into 3rd person.

    I am asking reader choice but soooooo many visited while I was gone this afternoon who probably won’t come back to vote or critique. Only three left a comment although twelve visited.
    ..

    Even with your flaws,
    darkness cratering the light,
    through you runs a path

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  20. Noelle Clearwater | July 3, 2011 at 7:05 pm

    It is a stunning image. I like the haiku. It is interesting and provocative. I like the light and shadow as well.
    Noelle

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  21. Teresa | July 3, 2011 at 8:15 pm

    What a great picture! Love the night shot.

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  22. Liz | July 3, 2011 at 8:20 pm

    I love the yellow light. Lovely night shot.

    Have a fabulous week!

    Liz @ MLC

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  23. Mika(Photoadik) | July 3, 2011 at 8:37 pm

    Awesome photo! love this!

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  24. bwpc | July 3, 2011 at 8:51 pm

    Great light and contrast as well as composition. Thanks for sharing! Here is my entry.

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  26. JayLeigh | July 3, 2011 at 10:33 pm

    Such a fascinating picture! The contrasts are wonderful.

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  27. ann nz | July 4, 2011 at 2:44 am

    I will be scared to walk alone here.

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  28. Carmen Henesy, Carmen's Chronicles | July 4, 2011 at 6:22 am

    Fantastic picture, covering a lot of memes. I love the shadows and the dramatic lighting!

    My Mellow Yellow Post is in celebration of the 4th of July and is a poem of mine!

    http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2011/07/happy-4th-of-july-home-to-usa-july-4.html

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  29. eden | July 4, 2011 at 6:25 am

    Wow, love this image.

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  30. saya | July 4, 2011 at 6:39 am

    Lovely pic and a haiku.. Beautiful 🙂

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  31. Martha | July 4, 2011 at 8:30 am

    I love it! Stopping by from MYM, it’s been awhile!

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  32. twitches | July 4, 2011 at 4:58 pm

    Very lovely sentiment in this.

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  33. Long Island Daily Photo | July 4, 2011 at 10:02 pm

    I love your choice of words. Nice photo too!

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  35. Tilly Bud | July 5, 2011 at 2:50 am

    This is lovely. Your middle line is a cracker. 🙂

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  36. mindlovemisery | July 6, 2011 at 2:58 am

    Oh I love this amazing!

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  38. patti | July 7, 2011 at 7:14 am

    This was beautiful- way to see a positive spin on someone!

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  39. Old Raven | July 9, 2011 at 4:32 am

    This is very thoughtful. I enjoyed it!

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  40. Leo | July 9, 2011 at 6:51 am

    Now thats what I call multitasking 😀 Nice beautiful haiku, MMT.

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