7:10 A.M.

Oct 11

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Pedestrian footbridge at dawn, Aztec, New Mexico
 


7:10 a.m.
whores and drunks are sleeping in
last night’s magic gone

 
Text and photo © 2013 by Magical Mystical Teacher
 
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Posted on October 11, 2013, in 5-7-5, Aztec, fence, Friday's Fences, Haiku My Heart, New Mexico, Recuerda Mi Corazon and tagged , , . Bookmark the permalink. 16 Comments.

  1. Carletta | October 11, 2013 at 7:46 am

    I like the lines in this.
    A very straight forward haiku. 🙂

    Reply
  3. LaVoice | October 11, 2013 at 8:20 am

    I can assure you we have plenty of those folks you described in our town. However, none in the ballparks.

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  4. Lea | October 11, 2013 at 9:17 am

    Wow. Truly speechless. This really hit home for many reasons.

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  5. judie | October 11, 2013 at 9:22 am

    This is awesome insight into reality.

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  6. readinpleasure | October 11, 2013 at 10:04 am

    The magic disappeared with the frolic! 🙂

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  7. Alice Keys | October 11, 2013 at 10:59 am

    This poem reminds me of my short stay in Colorado. The night people vanished in the morning light.

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  8. Marleen | October 11, 2013 at 11:11 am

    This fence really keeps you on the right track.

    Reply
  9. Pamela Gordon | October 11, 2013 at 5:21 pm

    Nice fence. Thanks for visiting me and leaving a comment.

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  10. Rebecca Brooks | October 11, 2013 at 10:15 pm

    i’m just imaging an entire collection of haiku starting with
    7:10 a.m.

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    • magicalmysticalteacher | October 12, 2013 at 6:24 am

      That’s all I can do right now: imagine. My laptop died Friday afternoon. I’m on a borrowed computer in an office. It’s very difficult!

      Reply
  11. Ramesh Sood | October 12, 2013 at 4:27 am

    MMT…something very thoughtful and different from you…good one..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/10/a-thin-line-divide-haiku.html

    RS

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  12. tanya breese | October 12, 2013 at 7:08 am

    i like the way it draws my eyes right down the road!

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  13. Nonnie | October 12, 2013 at 9:02 am

    sad statement about too many in our world!

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  15. EG CameraGirl | October 14, 2013 at 2:26 pm

    Life’s reality is very harsh for some people.

    Reply

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